Editor

Jenny Bowman

Middle Grade, Children's Books

United States English (US and UK)

Vetted Editor

How we vet professionals

Before anyone joins our team, we check their work and background. Only professionals who pass every step are listed here.

  • Application and work samples reviewed by our team
  • Identity confirmed
  • Experience and references checked
  • Contractor agreement signed, with confidentiality for your manuscript

Your manuscript is shared only with the professional working on it.

About Jenny

Jenny Bowman is Children’s Book Editor with over fifteen years experience providing developmental editing and children’s book coaching for Picture Books, Chapter Books and Middle Grade Novels. She works with authors from around the world, and has edited books on the New York Times bestselling book and series lists, and books with international acclaim.

Expertise

  • Developmental editing
  • Query letter and synopsis review
  • Children's book coaching

Genres

Fiction Children's books Middle grade Chapter books Picture books Early readers

Services Prices in US dollars. Your written quote confirms the final price.

Developmental Editing and Assessment

Line edits to address: dialogue and sensory descriptions, narrative voice, language, pacing and deep line editing for syntax Global edits to address: through-line, age or genre appropriateness, underlying premise and story, plot, character and/or subject development, and the craft and literary art of the manuscript Evaluation of the Manuscripts strengths and weaknesses up to $2980

$2,980per manuscript

Children's Book Consultation

Consultation for up to one hour to chat about your manuscript, synopsis, query. We can bounce around ideas, or talk about publishing options and the market. I will provide verbal feedback for up to 2500 words of one project.

$310per session

Query Letter Review

In your Query Letter Review, I’ll make sure your letter is formatted correctly, reads professionally, and ticks all the boxes while maintaining your own narrative voice. Detailed written feedback on your query letter (up to 1000 words) Review of formatting, structure, pitch, bio, and overall presentation Feedback on voice, tone, and professional readiness In-line notes throughout your letter

$210per project

Experience

  1. Owner/Editor, Jenny Bowman Editorial2012 to present

Certificates and memberships

Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators
the Editorial Freelancers Association

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