Sue Toth
Fiction, Memoir
United States
About Sue
I am a developmental editor and book coach. My specialty is working with fiction authors in the genres of romance, mystery, thriller, psychological thriller, and suspense. When you work with me, we will look at the big picture of your book together. I'll help you with plot holes, character development, continuity, or any other issue or question you may have. We'll make your book unputdownable!
Services Prices in US dollars. Your written quote confirms the final price.
Developmental Editing
Big picture editing for consistency, flow, character development, plot holes. Service includes a detailed report suggesting changes along with comments in the manuscript via Track Changes.
Manuscript Evaluation
Big picture editing for consistency, flow, character development, plot holes. Service includes an overview editorial report.
Book Coaching
Service includes ongoing coaching on a chapter by chapter basis. I will read chapters that we agree to in advance and spend an hour coaching you on what you've already written. I can also coach you through areas where you are stuck on any aspect of the manuscript. Per word fee for chapters is a separate charge from hourly rate listed.
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Experience
- Freelance, Sue Toth Editing Services2012-present
- Journalist, wide variety of publications1990-2012
- Adjunct Professor, Fairleigh Dickinson1999-present
Education
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